Saturday, June 6, 2009

Time to Get My Red Pen Out

Okay. So I have my monologues done. I think each has a clear point on view, voice, and each has a clear main idea. This is good. But I need to read over them and make hte language pop. This is the last time we are really going to hear from the characters, so they need to really say something and say it well.

Some of the monologues are better than others. Dana and her mother's are the weak links, I think. But I think I can improve them. And once I do, it's off to the last freaking chapter. OMG.

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